Friday, May 12, 2017

Revised Final Script


Final Presentation Script

            This space is designed for inhabitation and circulation by a painter and an animator. The painter requires an open space with ample lighting with room to position their easels and subjects to be painted. Such open space and exposed lighting allows for the detailed observation a painter needs. The animator on the other hand requires a quiet and enclosed space away from distraction to allow them to focus on their animating programs and think introspectively about their project. Both are students that will need access to the existing building, which is satisfied by a public space connecting the individual occupant rooms to the façade.
            The formal aspects of the design focus on approaches of aggregated masses and axial carving voids. Components come together to form a structure of individual spaces with a heavy, massive presence. While these spaces work to define the rooms for occupation, they do not effectively address circulation. The carving voids act to transform the spaces created by the components into a connected system. Each space becomes linked to each other by becoming hollowed out and carved through by axial pathways. This allows the spaces to remain separated in their inhabitation but easily accessible to the occupants via circulation paths.  Simply accommodating the program proved to be a rudimentary solution to the design, the structure needed something to give it a formal language and not just a description of occupation.
            My design concept was largely dependent on the conglomeration of mass and the subsequent carving of those masses. This had been my concept since midterm when we completed the component exercise and I began to contemplate hybridizing the blocky form of the component model with the carved spaces of the solid/void exercise. It seemed to be a logical combination, as surely the mass of the components could be altered by axial voids as the cube of the solid/void had. The site began to influence the design with the way the components aggregated, assembling to conform to the façade and corners created by the site. This created a dynamic of upper and lower space, each with slight differences in their form and function.
            To unite my project, I arranged the components so their interior spaces aligned to allow for the introduction of circulation and inhabitation. When I realized the components were still too separated and not accessible to circulation and later program space, the carving voids offered the perfect opportunity to link the isolated spaces with one another and transform the project from an object to an inhabitable space. The upper and lower division of the project developed into the program of the occupants, a painter who needed natural lighting in the upper space, and a computer animator that needed the quiet seclusion of the lower space.
            From the critique, suggestions were made to further explore the use of the film and body position diagrams in my design, using certain aspects of the forms they produced to influence my arrangement of components. I admit it was challenging to consider all aspects and influences posed by the various exercises. Making a design that addressed program, occupants, film references, formal systems, functionality, and integration to the site meant often the whole design became disjointed as individual aspects of the design developed independently. In future designs I must remember to continuously integrate these design elements so they do not become contradictory and impossible to explain as a coherent design.
            Another focal point of the critique was the possibility or re-introducing certain design elements evident in the midterm model but lacking in the final. What interested the critics was the sheer mass of the midterm model, stating it had a presence and weight that was lost by the open planar system of the final. I partially agree to this, in that I should not have been so quick to convert the entire model to plane, perhaps instead using a slightly more circuitous carving to create interior spaces that didn’t simply mirror the outside structure. For example, the massive, sloped form at the base of the structure was turned into a hollow box that looked solid from the exterior but remained the same shape on the inside. Rather than carve out the space to the point where it is just a box, smaller spaces could be carved into the mass, creating unexpected interiors that are entirely different than the exterior shape.

            

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